Critique Archive #54
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Dear Agent/OR,
Doesn’t everyone wonder when it’s their time to
die?
One mother, Vera, seems to know.
Statements of, “If I make it till Christmas” are
heard quite often.
And what would you do if you thought you had killed
your own mother?
When Vera dies and comes back from the dead to
tell her daughter, Kathie, “I am alive, I did not die!” Kathie is not surprised
by her mother’s courage and strength to reach through the veil, after all, her
mother had hitch-hiked thousands of miles with her three small children without
a penny to her name in order to save her children’s lives while she was alive. Why
would she not continue to watch over them?
Vera leads her daughters, Kathie, and Donna, to
greater Awareness and Healing through her 'Watching over them while in Spirit'
and at times 'PLAYING TRICKS' to get their attention. While Kathie learns to
communicate with the dead, Donna wants nothing more than to be left alone. The experiences detailed are astounding.
This book was first written on the devastation of a beloved mother's
journey through three major strokes and the decision of whether or not to
prolong her life. It soon expanded into
a most amazing ‘Afterlife’ story that will astonish even the harshest skeptic for
once this portal from another dimension is opened
numerous soul’s follow.
This book is also written about the
extraordinary life Vera’s daughter, Kathie, has experienced. After being
abducted as a very young child and then almost dying by electrocution at the
age of seven only ‘Divine Intervention’ could bring such a child into the world
of the fully living. And this is only the beginning for now Kathie has been
given several gifts to share with others such as messages given by Divinity,
specifically, Mother Mary, and our Lord. Included also, a miraculous spirit
photograph given as confirmation of an earlier visitation. And, Kathie no longer thinks of so-called death, as
an end – only the most precious of beginnings for she has seen her mother’s
Spirit - ‘THE VERY ESSENCE OF GOD’ exit her mother’s mouth upon her final
breath. Kathie experiences both a Heavenly
state and a Heavenly place, talks to the dead, receives
spiritual teachings, has psychic visions, and remains present in the
dreamscape. How can Kathie actually be
aware enough in a dream to ask her mother, “Momma, is there really a Heaven?”
And further, ask God, “Please God, let me wake up!”
And what would you do if you saw your brother who committed suicide
alive and well when you’d been told he’d gone to Hell?
I have enclosed the beginning of my manuscript ‘I
AM ALIVE, I DID NOT DIE!’
along with a few key sections. Included also is a SASE for your
convenience. Thank you for your
consideration. I look forward to an
opportunity to share the entire manuscript with you soon.
Sincerely,
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